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Review:Maelody says:
Uh oh! While I admit that being expelled from the school is a bit weird, I like that there is a punishment of some sort so that way they know what they did was equivalently "wrong". Though, I wish it was just a suspension or something, because I feel like expulsion would be terrible for underage wizards just because they had a baby. Now they can never get a good job, because they can't go back to school to get NEWTs, so it's like the school is setting them up to have a hard time in raising the child now. :( So I do hope that Flitwick has a heart! Maybe, even though it would still be sad, he could only expel one in order for at least one parent to finish their schooling?

I don't think Bill and Fleur will be too upset actually. I mean, don't get me wrong, they'll definitely be really upset, but they don't seem like the "yell about it and make a scene" kind of people. Just the sort of people maybe that you would extremely hate to disappoint. Freya, on the other hand, with how afraid she is to tell anyone, I feel as though her parents or something would go off the wall. Maybe Bill can step in?

I don't like that Malcolm kid makes me so mad! If he the repercussions of having a child, I don't know why he would go shouting across the classroom in the first place. No amount of lying is forgivable later just to find out if he can 'deserve' to hear if the rumors are true. I hope he gets a detention every Saturday until he graduates! lol

Nice chapter! :) I look forward to reading more!

Author's Response: It's more of a suspension, she's able to go back for her last year of school if she desires and if they can work something out with the baby. So it's not permanent.
I wanted to include a punishment, because I don't really find it believable that teachers would be okay with pregnant teenagers at their school.
Flitwick does have a heart, don't you worry.

Bill and Fleur will be upset, but they'll be more concerned for Louis and Freya. Louis hates disappointing them, it's much worse then if they yell at him. Freya's parents are a no nonsense couple and they will make their feelings very clear on the subject.

I hate Malcolm too, he's not a very nice person at all.

Thank you so much for the review, I hope that you continue enjoying the rest of the story. :D


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