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Review:Alexandra M. Camilleri says:

First of all, I must say that this chapter was absolutely brilliant, as all your previous chapters have been.

Secondly, as you said yourself previously, Mr. Moody is such chameleon! I did not in the least expect him to be a civil servant - and one whom takes care of unruly witches to boot. The way he seemed to avoid answering any question regarding his magical patronage makes me believe that there is much more to him than I can ever think of at the moment. At first I assumed he was just a simple muggle, then after he showed a certain amount of knowledge about the magic world, the status of a squib would have been more fitting. However, I am pretty sure that during those times, squibs were ostracised and surely, they would not be able to attain a profession with the ministry. Moody is surely turning out to be quite an enigma. If I am not mistaken, Alastor Moody is cited to be a Pure-blood wizard and so, I am interested to see how you spin this tale out. And also, those scars seem to have a tantalising mystery behind them, Hm I wonder, how/when will Helen discover them?

Regarding the mystery man at the end of the chapter, I am on tenterhooks to see what will happen next. Maybe Helen will find some answers, or maybe she'll find more obstruction.

All in all, I would like to thank you for your hard work and praise you for your commendable effort. Keep it up!

(P.S. Thank you for that detailed reply! :D )

Author's Response: Thank you for returning to read and review the newest chapter! It was a wonderful treat to see your name on another review, and I'm pleased to hear that you enjoyed this chapter as much as the last.

Moody's position is a complicated one, even delicate in nature. He keeps as much back about himself as Helen does; neither of them is particularly candid, constantly holding things back. It's an interesting experiment to write characters like these two, to slowly reveal their personalities and lives, not only to readers, but to each other. Helen will learn more about him in the next chapter, but only a little bit more. ;)

Thank you so much for your support of this story! It means a lot to hear your thoughts on the chapters, and I look forward to seeing what you think of the new chapter (once it's posted).

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