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Review:Broken Butterfly says:
This has a good plot, it is interesting to read. I want to know more so I would want to read on. Now, as for James and Sirius's relationship, its okay. A bit unrealistic I think. these are guys your know, best friends but still guys, and when they are talking about what happened i would expect more detail and pushing to get information. However James's reaction to sirius near death experience is really good, exactly what I think a friend would feel if they saw the BF in the same situation. I really hope this helps.

Author's Response: Thank-you you've really helped :D I'm happy you'd want to read more and your finding it interesting so far, I think further on however in the story gets a little more long winded and less interesting, i'll hopefully come back to your for another review, your honest and straight to the point to thank-you :D
I'm glad you were truthful about the unrealistic thing, I'll definitely go back over and make amends to the chapter, I actually agree with you :P
anyway thank-you. Your great :D

- kjp

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