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Review:unakrnkiller says:
I have to say that I love how you have written Bellatrix. That is exactly how I would imagine a youthful Bellatrix. Her personality and mannerisms are spot on.

It seems that things are getting a bit more dangerous and volatile in Beth's world. Hopefully the action will begin really soon... but then again, hopefully it won't because that means that James and Lily's lives will be hanging by a thread. It also means that Frank and Alice will be tortured into insanity. I have always felt that Neville had it worse off. His parents were still alive, but he could never have a relationship with them; a constant reminder of what he really lost.

I really like that we got a glimpse into Serverus's world again. Although, every time he mentions Lily, I seethe inside. I know it is just an illusion, but UGH!

Anyways, I look forward to the next installment. :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the Bellatrix compliment! She's one of the hardest characters for me to write, somehow, but knowing someone enjoyed it is actually a really big confidence boost. She's certifiably crazy, that's for sure, and somehow that makes it that much more interesting to write her.

I can't tell you for sure what's on the horizon without spoiling a few major plot developments, but I'll tell you that we haven't seen the last of the bottle of memories, or of the Order itself! I think I nearly agree with you about Neville's plight, too; having your parents not able to recognize you might almost be worse than having them dead.

Severus/Beth forever! ♥ Thank you so much for reviewing this chapter, as always. It really does mean so much to me that you take the time to stop by each week. I hope you enjoy the next chapter, too!


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