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Review:adluvshp says:
Hey!

Here for review tag!

I definitely enjoyed this one-shot! It was a very unique plot idea. I have never come across a story from a Dementor's POV before! I liked the concept of the souls of the people that get kissed turning into dementors, that's something i never thought of before but now it seems plausible!

I liked your main character, and liked reading him, and I hope he finds his family! He should be able to xD The narrative was clear and flowed smoothly, and made for a light fun read.

The alliterations were a little too much at times, like some sentences were a little too long-winded to read, but apart from that, this was pretty awesome and I liked it very much.

Great job!
Cheers!
AD
(AditiDraco95)

Author's Response: Hello! I'm glad to hear you enjoyed this fun little story of mine. It's a little strange, but was a real pleasure to write, especially the details that went into creating new Dementors.

I'm glad you liked Derwent as well! His voice was rather unexpected for me but still a lot of fun. I think he'll be able to find his family too! :)

Thank you for pointing out those CCs, they are very helpful! I do tend to play around with words a bit too much sometimes, haha. :P

Thank you for a lovely review! :)


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