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Review:Fawkes394 says:
I also find those muggle games quite weird... I just needed to say that :)

'The same Hot Ravenclaw Jack who I wasn't actually sure was genetically possible, due to perfection'< My exact thoughts on Jack! And she FINALLY admitted he's perfect (yay!)

Lily's awkwardness while praying! I can't believe she actually searched on 'how to pray in the library' haha. Please don't think I'm heartless because I laughed at it! It kind of made me really sad, because she's saying such sad things, but it also made me laugh, she was so awkward.
I loved the scene with Lily furious at the midgets. I really have no patience for those either, they are so arrogant and annoying. I'd love to be able to scare them with detention threats... Instead I just yell at them, when they annoy me, and they laugh at me : (

Why are people in the Ministry so horrible?! She was so happy and cheery and they just had to ruin her mood. I hate them too. And I wonder what's going on with Jack, I hope he's alright. Actually, I NEED to know!

PS: I really hope you do well on your exams! Chocolate is good for stress, I eat tons of it during exam weeks (and normal weeks too).

Author's Response: That comment was actually a vent about some of my guy-mates. I JUST DON'T UNDERSTAND. It has no purpose just- what? I can't even...
I had so much fun creating variations of that phrase, 'Hot Ravenclaw Jack', but it eventually got far too explicit so I reverted to the original. And anyway, it was mostly my inner fangirl saying it all anyway.
She is adorable. I think she just wanted to get it right, though, because she thinks she only really has one shot at it. Oh, I don't! I intended it to be awkward because she IS awkward about the whole thing.
Ahh. Fury at the midgets. Similiar to my own anger at small people at high school. They just seemed to get smaller and more arrogant each year. Don't worry, I got laughed at too :(
I don't think they were unreasonable, actually... they were pretty astute, and she offered no evidence that she did do outside activities, and what with the Ministry crackdown on theorists...
You'll find out a bit next chapter, actually! Thank you so much for both your lovely reviews :)
PS. Aww, thank you so much! I have discovered this... I really need to work out after my exams are done now, though. ;)

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