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Review:Faith100z says:
Hi there! :)

This is seriously brilliant!

You really did a great job with the second person! The way you used it with the description and language created such a haunting effect while I was reading. And the way you implied things through little subtle lines ("Like the others.") that make such an impact was awesome. I really got a sense of the hopelessness of the first war and of how she might be one of the only ones left out of all her friends.

If I had to guess, I'd say it's either Dorcas Meadowes or Marlene McKinnon, if we're assuming Voldemort killed Marlene's family shortly after/before her and not at the same time. The way you left it pretty open to interpretation was really neat!

It flowed so well too. The length was really perfect. I love that you didn't write a really long drawn out death scene, because that's usually not realistic.

You did such an amazing job, this is really well written. I love stories about the first war and this one was so brilliant and haunting.

- Faith

Author's Response: Hello!

Aw, thank you! :D

You're far too nice with all your lovely compliments! Thank you so much! ♥

Yeah, I had Dorcas Meadowes in my mind when I was writing it, but it could totally be Marlene McKinnon! I like laving things for open interpretation, it's amazing seeing how different most peoples' reactions are. (Except this one everyone picked Dorcas Meadowes haha)

Thank you so much for this amazing review, you really made my day! ♥

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