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Review:Broken Butterfly says:
HMMM. I like the idea that this is a next gen era after they all graduate from Hogwarts. I really liked the description of Victorie's dress. Th only thing I would offer a critique to is that I don't relate t the characters at all because i don't prefer next gen era stories, and it took awhile for the story to develop for me. A little background to each character would be helpful. Otherwise I really like the plot so far, and I think it is realistic from both a wizarding world and a reality to the readers standpoint. Hope this helps.
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Author's Response: Background comes further along in the story, I promise ;), though I'm glad you liked the plot, even if you don't prefer next gen much :). Thanks for the review!

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