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Review:patronus_charm says:
Ooh I really loved this chapter, and I think it’s my favourite one of all of them so far. I think it’s the way you caught the calming nature of Flitwick, and he seemed so at ease with himself and the situation. It was strange to see that he could view death as something which just happens, but then he’s the head of Ravenclaw so I suppose if it’s going to be anyone it would be him.

You really caught people’s reactions to certain situations, but I think my favourite part of the chapter was Flitwick’s scene with Hermione. It was really heartfelt and tender. They understood one another perfectly. I could really tell that Hermione was grieving a lot just through her actions and Flitwick’s observations.

I have a few minor CC’s. The quote at the top was really spaced and I wasn’t sure if you were aware of it, so I thought it would be best to point it out. Also, you have a fondness for colons, but you might want to change a few for semicolons to prevent repetition.

Other than that it was a really enjoyable chapter :’)

-Kiana

Author's Response: Hi! I'm so glad you liked this chapter, it was one of my favourites as well! It's wonderful to hear you thought he was well portrayed, and that his calming personality and rational mind came across.

Aw, I'm so glad you liked the scene with Hermione! It was actually a last minute addition, but just felt right somehow. I think Hermione, who is not only the ultimate student but also very perceptive to how other people are feeling, would know exactly what to say to Flitwick.

Thank you for those tips, I will definitely work on that! :) And thank you for a lovely review! :)


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