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Review:Maelody says:
Hi there! I just finished reading Delicate and Still Delicate, so coming to find this is really nice! (I like my chapterly dose of baby drama, what can I say?)

I really like the beginning of this story already. I feel like the length of it really can sum up just how it would go in someone's real-life situation. She has just told him, and now it's time to go. I love how it's in Louis' point of view, because we hardly ever see much of a father's perspective on or in anything we see. So, this is a nice chance to see it.

For some reason, and I don't know why, the name Freya really reminds me of Frito. And I don't like Fritos, and oddly enough, it's making me not really like Freya in a weird sense. This is totally not your fault! I have no idea how my brain comes up with these connections! Just, for some reason, I see myself not liking Freya at this point of the story lol.

In a sort of quick, off-hand question (still story related sorta), is that Evan Peters as Louis in your banner? Please tell me my eyes are correct, because I LOVE him, and therefore, my brain doing that weird connecty thing again, it just helps me love Louis already a ton more ;).

Anyway, I didn't notice much that caught my eye (why would I? You're a validator now! :D). I like what I see so far and I definitely want to continue! :)

Author's Response: Awww I'm so glad that you chose my story to read!

Thank you, I wanted to make it from Louis's POV as you never see anything from the guys POV in stories like this. So I'm glad that you like it.

Really? I'm not sure what Fritos are, are they crisps? Haha, that's cool you don't have to like Freya. :D

YES! That is Evan Peter's in my banner! Haha I'm glad that it made you like Louis a lot more! Louis is pretty awesome. :p

Haha being a validator doesn't make me immune to grammar mistakes and the such. :p

Thank you so much for the review and I'm so sorry it's taken me this long to reply to them.


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