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Review:patronus_charm says:
Hey there! I saw that you were nominated for most thought provoking Diadem and Iíd been meaning to check this story out for a while, so now seemed like a great time!

Wow. That is all I can really see about this chapter, and wow in a good way mind. I can definitely see why it was nominated for that diadem. Iím just blown away by it all really, and Iím so glad that I clicked on it. It was just amazing.

It didnít connect for a while that Lila was Lavenderís daughter, but when I found out it made perfect sense, and it really fitted with the bitter and slightly evil character you built her up to be. I think it was a really brave step to make your main character hate on everything, but it was really effective because I really felt as if I knew her even though it was only after the first chapter.

I canít wait to learn more about Lavender, and what sheís been getting up to and whose Lilaís father, as itís obviously had an effect on her if she acts in this away. Her emotions are so deep, and I can relate to them even after chapter one. Ah this was just a perfect chapter really.

And Albus Potter is sort of evil too. I rarely see that done, but I really liked it. I always imagined that the next gen children wouldnít be as perfect as theyíre usually portrayed to be so itís a real delight to read how youíre portraying them here.

Your overall style is really lovely and easy to read and the descriptions were great. You have a new follower of your story, and I will be back as soon as revision lets me :D


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