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Review:PitchBlue says:
Hi again!
Great, great chapter! I love Tonks' flow of mind, you've really captured her character well. Some of her comments like "Today it was about how I shouldn't be buying an ice cream despite the fact I was forced to stand in the baking heat" and "Plus that Chinese I ate last night had a weird smell, so that probably didn't help" really got me laughing, it seems so like her. Again, I really admire how fluent your writing and storyline is. It's something I have a lot of trouble with when I write, it just never seems to read easy enough. Good of you to include Bill and Fleur's story, I realized I was actually very curious to how that had went. So, I'm going to continue to the next chapter!

-Laura

Author's Response: Hey Laura!

I'm so glad to see you back again :D Haha, I'm glad that you liked Tonks' thoughts as I was worried they may just come off as innane ramblings. I guess reading through a story a lot helps, as it makes you realise little things you thought you missed. I have a one-shot about Bill and Fleur's story if you wanted to know more about it ;) Thank you for this lovely review, it really made me smile!

-Kiana


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