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Review:RavenclawGirl11 says:
This chapter is slightly better, however it is brief and short in detail. I wonder what happened to Harry's body, but, for me personally, I would have left it on a cliff hanger,

That aside, I like the progression of the story and feel you are pacing it out well.

~ Macy

Author's Response: Thank you for the review!

I've added a note in my chapter to include more details. Rereading the chapter, descriptions of Gawain and his office as well as the Under-aged magic office could all be added. I also will add Gawain calling in everyone, perhaps in a way that could be a cliff hanger.

Thank you again!


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