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Review:RavenclawGirl11 says:
Hi again! This chapter is smaller and I think is sort of a filler chapter into the real action (sorry if you don't agree)

I am not being purposely mean, however I feel this chapter lacks detail. If you go back over it and flesh out this chapter, it'll be better.

Sorry for such a negative review, but this story has potential.

~ Macy x

Author's Response: Thank you for this review.

I agree that this chapter ended up being a filler chapter.

When I first started posting the story, I was posting smaller chapters. Looking at the chapter lengths now, I really should have combined both this chapter and the next one. There is also another couple chapters that really ought to have been combined also.

However, I have taken another look at this chapter and feel as if I can add more interaction with Petunia and Dudley so that Harry's reactions will make more sense in the next chapter.

I've added notes into the chapter so I won't forget to create the additional portion of the chapter.

Thank you very much!

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