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Review:Lululuna says:
Hi! :)

So first of all, I'm really enjoying Molly's voice as a narrator. She's so sassy, but also very cynical, even when only addressing herself. I love how she was constantly contradicting her decision to meet him for the "not a date" lunch. She reminds me a bit of Percy, too, whens she says "I'm a professional Ministry worker," as if trying to reassure herself with the statement of these facts.

I love how she overanalyzes everything, like Campbell showing up later than her, but not too early. And then of course she thinks that she'll "try out" being later next time, like other people do, haha! And she's so cute when she realizes that she likes Campbell, and then tries to analyze why she likes him, and then analyzes why she's thinking about it! And now I'm analyzing her too! Gah!

It's very convincing how Campbell likes Molly because she's not obsessed with the idea of him. They like each other because they treat each other like normal people, and I feel like Campbell's spontaneousness (apparently that's a word!) and Molly's liking for organization will actually play off each other really well and make them more compatible.

This is such an original take on a romance, and I really like it so far!! And, I hope Molly gets to meet some dragons!! :D

Author's Response: Hi!

I'm so pleased you like Molly as a narrator! I had so much fun writing her character and her thoughts. She does have a tendency to overanalyse absolutely everything, which makes it very difficult for her to do something like have a conversation with someone she doesn't know. There's also the problem that quite often, the filter between her brain and her mouth stops working and she sometimes finds herself saying things that normally would stay in someone's head!

I'm so happy you think it seems convincing for Campbell to like Molly, because even though they're very different they are compatible - in my head, anyway!

Thanks so much for coming back and leaving such a lovely review again! And as for Molly meeting some dragons - well, you'll just have to read on and see :P

Sian :)

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