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Review:Lululuna says:
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Wow, this is another very powerful chapter. I really enjoy your writing style: it's very strong and compelling! The characterization is very good as well: I can really feel Harry's desperation, and Devlin's anger and confusion in the memory. Harry's guilt over having given up on Devlin while he was still alive was very heartbreaking.

I really like the character of Geoffrey as well! He seems to have a lot of depth and he isn't purely "good" or "evil," he's just trying to survive. He clearly cares for Devlin as well. I really like the conflicting morals and emotions here: Harry sees Geoffrey as a jailer of his son, but Geoffrey sees Harry as a parent who let his child be bit by a werewolf.

I liked this sentence: "Geoffrey would like to know who or what chose the destiny of the powerful." It really sums up the whole conflict nicely, doesn't it?
It will be very interesting to see whether Devlin turns out more like Harry or Voldy. I can definitely sense the Voldy in him, but I wonder if he will be reunited with his parents and how that would change things.

Anyway, great job with another powerful and well-written chapter! :)

Author's Response: :D :D @ believable and compelling and connecting to characters!

I also really like Geoffrey. He is a good man who has grown up around evilness and so he can't be entirely good, ever. His thoughts and logic are a Death Eater's for the most part, but he responses and reactions are his own. He is especially protective of Devlin.

*Huge grin* @ you liking THAT quote. It is my FAVORITE quote of possibly everything I have written so far! :D

I think in regards to Devlin that it is always important to remember that J.K Rowling said Voldemort would have been different if he had been raised by his family. Yet he still would have been Tom Riddle, the boy who could become the monster. Devlin could be either, just like Tom Riddle could have.


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