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Review:Bobby Dazzler says:
Hey Claire, how're you going today? :) Here to stalk again, mwahahaha...

Orion latched the letter onto the family and sent it off. - FAMILY OWL. I think there's meant to be an owl in there somewhere lol. Was taken right after Orion's letter, and the paragraph that followed I think changes tenses so might just wanna take a look at that again ok.

Now onto the review, I enjoyed this. I like stories that are from the POV of minor characters, or sub-plot characters or whatever you'd classify Sirius' parents as lol. It just brings another aspect of the story alive to everyone and it's always interesting seeing how someone interprets missing parts of the story and I can see this being a plausible thing to have happened and fit nicely into canon, so well done. You've done it justice I reckon.

There were only a few minor grammar mistakes in this, mostly to do with tense changes (have/has etc), but aside from that it read nicely. I liked how at the end Sirius began to question his views a little about his family, father in particular. I thought it was a fitting ending and left the reader pondering what happened after then, and until what we know happened with canon, it's clever. I enjoyed this, think I'm just a fan hehe :) xx

Author's Response: LOL WHOOPS! yeah, there's definitely supposed to be an owl in there. Thanks for seeing the grammar mistakes! The tense thing is definitely one of my weaker points!

I definitely didn't want to stray too far from canon because I'm a canon-lover, though I do have my head-canons like this, where Orion isn't as bad as everything might think.

Thanks for the review! (:



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