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Review:ValWitch21 says:
Oh, no. I can't help but worry that this chapter is the turning-point for Frank and Alice (RAISIN COOKIE AGAIN!), which is something I'd never thought you'd include, so now I'm hoping it's not because that would break my heart.

I've got to ask a question that worries me though: how could Dumbledore ever have left Alice and Frank go on a mission when he knows they're being targeted?

... find Bridger.

I'm sorry to come back again with this image, but really, the cookie comparison suits you far too well. Is it Severus? I hope so. Or maybe not. I just hope the Death Eaters aren't talking about Beth.

I'm sorry for the shortness of this review, but right now I'm at a point where I am quite literally in th edge of my seat. See you at the end of chapter eleven!

Author's Response: Frank and Alice are fine up until the point of this chapter -- no worries! Nothing happens to them at least until James and Lily's deaths, remember, because they're tortured for information about Voldemort's whereabouts. As for why they're doing mission work, I see Alice especially as a hugely brave person. I didn't write this explicitly -- and maybe I should have -- but I'm under the impression they tried to tell Frank and her that they could sit out missions, and neither of them accepted. For them, the risk was worth it.

Ah, what a mystery! Did Sirius really overhear Severus, or was it someone else? And who, specifically, are they talking about? How dreary life would be without questions! Yours will be answered in due time, never fear.

I apologize equally for the shortness of my responses -- your reviews mean so much to me, and I wish I could give them more justice than this. ♥ Thank you so much for taking the time to do this for me!

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