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Review:Lululuna says:
Review tag right back at you! :)

Another great chapter! I really liked the further insight into Brienne's mother, and the causes of her death. It's very intruiging, and I like how you've tied in the mystery of her mother and why someone would want to kill her with Brienne's experiences at Hogwarts. There's so many interesting plot lines, and they fit together in such an interesting manner! Hmm, I wonder if Brienne's mother was involved with the Order of the Phoenix? And if it was one of Voldy's supporters who killed her? At first I was thinking of Bertha Jorkins for some reason, but then she died at the beginning of GoF, didn't she? Hmm...

I'm also liking Brienne's friendship with the twins more and more. George coming after her was so sweet, and I really like the connection and chemistry they have going on between them. I like how Fred is confused that he can't completely understand what his twin is thinking: it must be strange for them when someone, especially a girl, comes into the equation! Brienne seems to fit well with them, and hey, she can already tell them apart!

I might have mentioned this in a previous review, but I really like how you set the story during PoA. I kind of think of it as the last normal Hogwarts year, since the next year was the Tournament which made Hogwarts life quite different, and then along came Voldy... And I love how Lupin plays a role as well! It all fits very nicely. :)

Great job!!! :D

Author's Response: Hi! Thank you very much for the review :)

I'm really glad you like it! :) This is still just setting up everything, and soon the story will kick into gear xD Thank you!

PoA is my favourite HP book other than DH, so I really wanted to start it here :) And also, you're right in that everything starts after this one xD

Thank you again!


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