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Review:LillyRoseanne says:
I thought I'd let you know that I am enjoying this story, was wondering where you got the name Adelynn from as I've never heard it before.

I am enjoying your character development, and was just wondering if Gwen had another reason for dumping him other than the obvious shallow ones? I'm just thinking for purposes of her not being a complete stereotype...
Don't get me wrong though, I like what I've read so far... :D

Author's Response: Thanks for you comment! I think the name Adelynn came when I was playing with different versions of the name Adelaide for a story a long time ago. I always loved the name, but it wasn't something I wanted to commit to a child or anything, so i saved it for a character name.

Gwen actually is somewhat of a stereotype, but only when she doesn't get her way or doesn't like you. Obviously Oliver loved her at one point. She was expecting fame and fortune with him and when he got injured she didn't see the chance for that anymore.

She's an only child and was constantly spoiled as a child and when she doesn't get her way, she just gives up. She was probably expecting Oliver to come crawling back to her and beg, but he is too proud for that and so it served as another reason for him to be completely broken.

I hope that answers your question. I feel like I went off on a tangent. :)

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