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Review:Lululuna says:
I like this already!! It's such an exciting beginning, though very sad to hear that poor Dedalus is dead! :( I wonder why the killer targeted him?! And Parvati's wand... hmm, I suspect there's some mystery going on there.

I really like the next generation world you've set up, especially Scorpius' musings on the history of the Malfoys and old Lucius still stewing away. The descriptions of Harry and Ron working as Aurors and details of how the department runs was very clear and set up the context really well!

I also love the main characters so far! I like how the story switched perspectives between Ron, Harry and Scorpius, and how it focused on both the older and younger generations. Their musings on Diggle's death were really heartbreaking!

Anyway, you've set up such an intriguing beginning, and I'm excited to read more! :D

Author's Response: Thank you so much for all the lovely comments! The reasons why the killer targeted the people he did are all explain throughout the course of the story. :)

I'm very touched by your comments and I appreciate them very much! Thank you!


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