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Review:Lululuna says:
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Aw, this was a cute little story!! I really liked how effortlessly you set up the context of the story in the post-war world. It seemed very realistic, and I liked how everyone went down slightly different paths than usual- like Ron and Luna being together, and Harry going on to play Quidditch. It kept the story fresh!

I also liked how you set up Malfoy and Hermione's flirtation: it wasn't like a spontaneous change in character where they loved each other, but a gradual progression of bantering, flirting, and finally this lovely little scene here in the Ministry. It was really cute! :)

I love the idea of charming the words ferret-boy on Malfoy. Hopefully Hermione will continue to hold it over his head if he every annoys her! :P

I liked this, and I think you did particularly well with writing the dialogue which flowed naturally and was engaging to read. Good job! :)

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks a lot for reading and reviewing! Sorry for the delay in responding!

I am glad you found this cute as that was my aim. Its a relief to hear that you think the whole post-war context was realistic, and found that the little details made it fresh!

Haha yeah. I always thought two people can't just suddenly love each other so they need to go through this attraction-fueled flirting phase etc. so its good to know you liked it all.

Haha Hermione will definitely hold it over his head in future xP

I am pleased to hear that the dialogue was good and you liked reading it. Thank you!


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