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Review:rogue_bludger says:
Ravenclaw Review Tag!
I love tonks, so anything from her perspective is totally up my alley. this was a great read, and i'm looking forward to reading more. i love how you managed to work with canon so well, and show things (in my opinion) very accurately from Tonks' point of view. One thing that I noticed though- some moments, you make it sound a lot like Tonks from the series, and some moments her thoughts feel slightly out of character. Nothing to stress about too much, but if you did go back to edit, maybe having less 'muggle' slang (like wannabe, and who on earth, etc). Just food for thought though- feel free to disregard! Overall, a great read, and I look forward to reading more!
~M

Author's Response: Haha I love Tonks too, so I'm so glad that you liked it! Haha I'm glad it worked with canon, as that's the thing I was most worried about. Ooh I'll definitely go and check out the muggle slang, but I assumed she would know some from her dad. Oh well, I'll review it anyway!

Thanks for the great review, and I hope you carry on reading!

-Kiana


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