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Review:MadiMalfoy says:
Lucky you, I still have 2 weeks of school left! :/ I loved this chapter!! You wrote action very well, I don't think you have too much of a problem with it whatsoever! The way you had them interacting with each other was perfect. I was nearly begging for them to lose control and just kiss each other! But I like how you made them pull away and not give in. It shows how much strength and self control you gave them as characters. So much happened in this chapter that didn't really happen. Phenomenal job! :) xx

Author's Response: Thanks I was really worried how the action would play out, I do think that there is room for improvement, but I am glad that it wasn't bad. Yeah I couldn't make them lose control where's the fun in that? lol. Yeah I felt that for Rose especially she would pull away because she is not ready, I think Scorpius would have been more willing to continue the moment. As for the chapter itself I am so glad that you liked it and that you felt that it said so much that is exactly what I was aiming for. Thank you so much reading and reviewing.

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