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Review:Lululuna says:
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Another great chapter! I like how well you've tied the story into canon, and I can really imagine Brienne fitting into the idea of Hogwarts I have in my head. You've clearly put a lot of thought and detail into the story, and it certainly pays off, like the exciting idea for practicing Stunning charms in DADA. Definitely seems like a lesson plan Lupin would think up!

Ah, the twins! I really, really love how you've portrayed them. It's spot on, but also gives them some time in the limelight. I'm very interested to see how you'll develop the twins as individuals, and how they'll interact and progress in friendships with Brienne (since they're on the banner, I'm going to put forward an educated guess that there will be a little more than friendship! :P). I loved how the twins were moving in unison and finishing each other's sentences, and how they were joking around with Brienne but also making her feel welcome.

I really liked the conversation about Brienne's mother with Lupin, and again you've done well at setting up the suspense and intrigue. I really like the plotline of her mother dying, by the way, and I'm curious to learn more about Lupin's involvement with Brienne's mother.

Nice work, once again! :)

Author's Response: Hi!

Making this match with canon is very important to me :) So thank you!

Writing the twins is SO much fun, but it can be hard to write their synchronicity and humour :) I'm glad you like them! They are definetely going to be developed more as the story goes on :)

Thank you very much for your lovely review! :)


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