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Review:-BookDinosaur- says:
-BookDinosaur- here with your requested review!

I really liked this chapter, and the story seems very interesting already. Can you keep a secret? I'm not that much of a fan of teen pregnancy stories. BUT, since this is about Louis (squee!) and it's from the father's point of view, I actually really like this story.

I like the relationship between Louis and Freya, Louis seems to really care for her, and I also like the fact that they weren't one night stands or 'enemies', but already in a relationship.

Your characters' reactions to the news was believable and well written, I could really imagine it going on. Their desperate attitudes were very realistic, they weren't sad and then suddenly happy dandy again, so good job on that. (I actually used the phrase 'happy dandy' in a sentence? I'm going insane.)

Your characters already have good personalities, I think that within one chapter you really developed them well, especially Louis and Bill.

So, well done on writing a teen pregnancy story I actually enjoyed reading. A lot.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to do this review for me. I really appreciate it.

Thank you, I can definitely keep a secret. I'm so glad that you like this story even though you're not much of a fan of teen pregnancy stories, Ah yes, I wanted to have a story from the fathers POV and who better then Louis? :p

Louis cares for her very much, I wanted to try something different, so that's why I chose to have them being in a relationship. It seems more real to me then a one night stand and that.

Thank you, I was quite worried that I wasn't making it seem that believable. I love that you used Happy dandy :D Definitely not going insane.

Thank you so much for your lovely and wonderful review, I'm so glad that you enjoyed this so much :D


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