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Review:AlexFan says:
I'm from the review battle so hello there!

I haven't got any criticism for you because in my unprofessional opinion this was perfect.

You has so much description that I could picture everything I my head while I was reading. Your flow was really great as well, I love how you wrote the chapter.

I think you really captured the idea of Gellert. You managed to show that he was a slightly arrogant person who knew his power and that he was stronger than everyone else but you also showed his fear of the fact that Albus was better than him and could destroy him. I thought it was very cunning of him on how he decided to play with Albus's feelings to win him over to his side.

I also love how you wrote Dumbledore, it was one sentence but it was that sentence that really made it obvious that this was Dumbledore. It was the line about how he thought he did the charm for the Great Hall ceiling really well but he still sounded like he didn't want to brag.

The way that you described Hogwarts made it seem very peaceful. I don't know how to explain it but just the way that you wrote it and described everything just made it sound peaceful to me and it made me relax even though I already am.

Anyway, this was brilliant and I really enjoyed it!

Author's Response: Hey there! Thanks so much for stopping by! :)

... seriously? Wow! Thank you so so much for that! :) That means so much! ♥

I'm glad you liked the description - I tend to write A LOT of description, so I'm never sure if it's overboard or not... so yeah, thanks!

Ah, Gellert... yeah, he's pretty arrogant :P He's definitely worried Albus could beat him if it came down to a duel, and he really doesn't want to lose, lol. I find him a really fascinating character, tbh, and I love the fact that you picked up on both his fear and his arrogance :)

Oh gosh, Dumbledore is so hard to write! You have no idea how happy hearing you say (write?) that makes me! Mahaha, I thought it was a Dumbledore thing to do... charm a ceiling... yeah, he's not quite as arrogant as Gellert :P A little bit, though. Still a little bit.

Thank you so so much for this review - it was really very, very lovely! ♥

Aph xx

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