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Review:RachaelBrittain says:
As shown in my previous reveiw under SeerAuror15913 I mentioned how Hermione was aware that houseevles could apparate in the manor and I am very happy that you took the time to change that as it has resulted in a very good chapter, almost faultless, nevertheless, (sorry to be picky) but Sparkles says something like "only house elves can" still, and then Narcissa apparates Hermione out of the manor a few lines later, I would suggest changing the line to "only my masters loyal family and house elves can" or something alike that. Nevertheless despite that minor mistake, I still believe that this chapter is brilliant, can't wait to re read the rest of the story :)

Rachael

Author's Response: RachaelBrittain,

Thank you for another review. I will have to look into that portion of this chapter, thank you bring it to my attention so I can fix it going forward!!

Thank you for the lovely review and pointers!

Meg


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