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Review:MissMdsty says:
Hello dear! Oh I just love Tonks. With every chapter I just grow more and more attached to her character.

The first part of the chapter with her visiting her parents was really heart-warming. I liked the part about the two of them not expecting to have a child like Tonks. I can feel their pain. If I had a child so accident-prone I'd probably baby proof the baby proofing devices. I also liked the fact that Andromeda didn't just jump on board with the whole "Sirius is innocent" idea. It gave a very realistic approach to the situation he is in at this time.

I was determined not to make a fool of myself in front of Remus. That's when I knew something was about to happen! But really, Molly should know better. You can't just keep the twins huddled up in a big and old and scary house and not expect them to amuse themselves.

Mad-Eye was really kept in character, which is something that I love. He has this air about him, of constant gloom and doom, and you captured it beautifully.

And Remus and Tonks on their first mission together! I'm curious what trouble she'll get into this time around! Great chapter!

Author's Response: Hey there! I'm so glad that you're growing attached to Tonks as I've had so much fun writing her :D

I thought it would be fun to explore her home life a bit more, so I'm glad that you liked it. I think they would need to baby proof everything with someone like Tonks, she's such a danger hazard. I'm glad that you liked Andromeda's reaction as, I agree, it wouldn't have made much sense otherwise.

Haha, yes she really tempted fate by thinking that line. I had to include a prank from the twins, but Molly being Molly was probably too stressed by other things to think of them!

I'm glad that you found Mad-Eye was in character, as he's so hard to write. As for the mission, I would have to quote more than 3 three lines for that scene so I decided it was best to skip it. I hope it worked out ok!

Thanks for this great review!

-Kiana


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