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Review:sweaterweather21 says:
Bianca seems interesting -- will we get to meet her in person? It's kind of funny how the two sisters are so different...

I like my sandwiches without olives, thank you very much.

The story about Addie and Hugo's friendship was adorable! I love how you had Hugo in Hufflepuff, he seems to fit so well there. It was also cute how he really wanted to be Addie's friend even though she cursed them.

My favorite part was when James told Addie he was having a funeral for his pet flobberworm. Seems like something a slightly drunk James Potter would say.

Hopefully James matures a bit as the story goes along because I can't see Addie keeping her cool for much longer haha! And it would be an interesting background story as to how James is so spoiled/entitled with Harry as a father. Harry is like the epitome of humble, so its interesting that his son would be so arrogant. But I guess James Potter I was pretty arrogant too, so maybe it runs with the name? Or maybe it's just a Potter trait that skips generations...

Anyway, lovely story so far! Can't wait for more chatpers :)

Author's Response: Hi! :)
Yes, we're definitely going to see Bea in the skin, but not for some time. And she and Addie are so different because despite being sisters, they never exactly led the same kind of life- one went to a wizarding school in Scotland, the other to a private school in London, one is an Auror-turned-nanny, the other is a supermodel.

You're not alone, dear.

Hugo is my favourite, even though as an author, I'm not supposed to have favourites. 'Nuff said.

That was my favourite bit too! The perfect amount of sassy, and like you said, slightly drunk James.

Hmmm, maybe the entire Potter's-arrogance-and-obnoxiousness thing /is/ genetic. Or maybe there is just this extremely surprising (I hope) backstory behind it. Either way, we'll have to wait and see.

Thanks for the wonderful review,

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