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Review:Lululuna says:
Another great chapter! I don't know, Scorpius is turning out to be pretty manipulative. I'm a bit confused about why Hannah likes him so much since he isn't that nice to her, but hopefully he'll either smarten up or she'll see his true colours soon! I do like the whole secret romance thing, though! :) I also suspect they're going to get caught at some point... "I fancy a visit with Moaning Myrtle?" Smooth Hannah, smooth.

I liked the interactions with "Teddy" and the Nogtail- it actually sounded kind of cute in a bloodthirsty magical creature way! Also, the inter-house tournament is a really cool idea to give the story an extra bit of action. I'm excited to find out what the first task is! :)

Author's Response: Hee, thank you! He is. I think he's very used to getting what he wants and he's suffering now that things are starting to become too much for him to manipulate and handle.

haha.. she is not smooth at all :D

Thank you! I'm glad you like the idea of the inter-house tournament. I didn't want to just have a story filled with drama, angst and Quidditch (that sounds like a title to a next gen.. lol) so I made the plans for it and I am glad I did.

Thank you for the review! I love reading your process through the story!


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