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Review:Calypso says:
Hello again! Third review time!

Ahh I love Teddy so much! The flashback was the cutest thing- Dominique's life does seem to have been pretty idyllic before the events of this story! I'm also glad that you explained the Victoire/Teddy situation as I had wondered what their attitude to each other was. As it is, it seems to have worked about pretty well for all of them :)

You seem to have Dominique's emotional state down to a T. That feeling crying until you don't think you cry anymore, that kind of simmering hysteria, the blankness of her future- it all seems completely appropriate and you convey it very effectively. Aside from

Delilah Jones (another awesome name!) piques my curiosity- she seems very capricious, and it was almost spooky, the way she changed from all concerned and motherly, to busisnesslike and demanding in a matter of moments. I really liked her at first, when she told Dominique she could have her job back, and seemed really to sympathise, but I'm not so sure about her now! Either way I certainly hope to see more of her!

And what a cliffhanger to leave us on! So far you've been fantastic at keeping up the tension, so I'm now dying to find out what Teddy's got to say to her!

-Bethany

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks again for reading and reviewing. Sorry for late responses.

I am pleased you liked Teddy and enjoyed the flashback. Yeah I didn't want any complications between them!

Aw I am glad that you think I have done well on Dom's emotional state, thanks.

I just came up with Delilah's name on a whim but thanks! She is weird yes, and there's definitely more of her =)

I am glad you like the whole tension and such, thanks.


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