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Review:Lululuna says:
Review tag! :)

Haha, so first of all I feel so bad for poor Brienne, being the center of attention and grouped in with the first years. I always thought how stressful being Sorted would be, and she really does stand out. I love how she's grown attached to Luna, even though she's a lot younger. It shows that she's not stuck up at all. So far, I really like her as a character: she's very modest, observant and all around rather likeable! :)

I'm definitely glad she's in Gryffindor. Also, random side note, I wonder if Beauxbatons would have houses, and how they would be divided? It would be interesting to read about anyway, but enough of this random tangent! :P

You've done a good job at building suspense of Brienne's past by hinting at her family. I'm very curious to find out what happened!

I'm curious about this sleeping situation. Is the room with the staircase the dormitory for all the fifth year girls? It would actually make sense if so, because I did think if all the years were as small as Harry's then Hogwarts would barely have any students!

Anyway, this was another good chapter, and I look forward to reading more! :)

Author's Response: Hi! Thank you for your review!

Brienne is my pride and joy as it were, so I really want her experience and the reading experience to come across as realistic as possible. So I'm glad it does xD

I have no idea if Beauxbatons has Houses :p It seems like they should, they've got to have some way of sorting the students.

The room with the staircase was the way I imagine all of the girl's dormitories to be xD Like you walk in, and you have to go either up or down depending on which year you are. Reading it back now it doesn't make a lot of sense xD

Thank you again! :)


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