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Review:adluvshp says:
Here for review number four (of the swap).

Aww this was such a sweet little one-shot. I absolutely love Remus/Tonks stories and I was pleased to see you did them justice. I enjoyed their first date immensely, the way things were going wrong and yet it was indeed perfect.

You characterised both Remus and Tonks really well. I liked the added touch of the mirror too. It'd be nice to have a talking mirror to keep company haha. The whole scene played out quite well and I really enjoyed the story.

Great job as always!
10/10
Cheers!
AD
(AditiDraco95)

P.S. I look forward to your reviews on the four chapters of my short story =) Thanks for swapping!

Author's Response: Hello there! So sorry for the late response!

Aww I'm so glad that you enjoyed this! I've never written Remus/Tonks before, so I'm glad I managed to do them justice! It's good that the balance between disastrous actually quite nice went okay!

I always get nervous about characterising people we see a lot of in the books, so your comments are wonderful to hear! Haha yeah, I came up with the mirror to break up Lupin's thoughts a bit at the beginning, but ended up getting quite fond of it! :P

Thankyou for this, and all your other reviews! It was a great swap :)

-Bethany


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