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Review:adluvshp says:
Here for your third review for the swap.

Aw this was a very dazzling piece of writing. I really, really loved your descriptions. There was so much imagery in it, I was completely captivated while reading. You literally brought Molly to life in the one-shot.

I liked the whole association with the cousin, and the shoes. It was a very cute fascination, and I liked how we saw it grow. There was almost a poetic feel to the narrative throughout and I absolutely loved that. The ending was really cute too with Arthur being there at a Muggle bar to release his worries and Molly dancing there. It was all quite believably presented.

All in all, this was another great piece of writing. I really enjoyed the story. It is simply beautiful! Great job!

10/10
Cheers!
AD
(AditiDraco95)

Author's Response: Hey there!
Aw thankyou so much! It's great to hear that you enjoyed the description in this, and that Molly seemed lifelike.
I'm a great believer in the power of a pair of shoes :P The bits with Cousin Florence were so much fun to write- all that kind of 50s glamour... Poetic? Wow that's so great to hear! I'm glad that you found the second half believable, as I'm aware it's not quite canon...

Thanks so much for another lovely review!

-Bethany


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