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Review:Jchrissy says:
Ohhh I feel so sad :(. I thought I submitted my review on the second, and then just looked to see if youíd responded, and I realized the review never went through :(!

Iím sorry this is now late! But I couldnít let anyone else get your birthday review when I wanted it all to myself!

Happy late birthday darling!

I love the way youíve started this. You set a perfect scene with Ginny. Not a comforting one of course, but perfect for the feeling youíre conveying with the start. Having her be unaware of the time that has passed was a really awesome touch because that just immediately makes the reader for desperate for her. Having even the basic sense of time taken away because of the darkness is a scary thought, and one that fit so well into this.

The pot calling the kettle black comment was so true, haha. I feel so bad for Ginny though being in that situation of having on idea whatís going on then having to hear these two bicker.

OH my gosh that was NOT expected! Now how disoriented she was makes a lot of sense!

Ohhh this turned so much darker than I expected but I canít say that Iím disappointed. I think the twist was really well done, especially considering Ginny didnít even know what she was. The missing students having been thought dead is the perfect way to sort of create this group of (sorry Ginny) monsters. Obviously theyíd be as good as dead to their family members, now part of this vampire cult, and Ginnyís slow realization that she was now part of it was really well done.

Iím happy you left it the way you did and never actually told what happened with the girl, though you leave the impression that Ginny wonít be able to fight what she now is.

There was a lot of really lovely description, well not lovely because it was quite terrifying, but you get what I mean.

I really enjoyed this Meg, and happy birthday ♥ Sorry again that itís a few days late :(.

Author's Response: JChrissy.

No worries:) I couldn't get on this weekend anyway. I was horribly busy! Thank you for the sweet birthday review.

I've been wanting a vampire fic for a while now but I didn't want it to be cliche. It seems like vampires are all the rage right now so I wanted to stay away from being like every other story. I wondered if I over did it in the first part where Ginny is in the room alone.

Hehe, I couldn't help myself. Most of the time I think of Pansy that way but not Ginny.

I will have a bit more fun with the group of 'misfits' :) I'm glad you liked the idea of a band of missing students and group of people. I wonder if Ginny will be able to just give in and be a part of the group. Hmmm?

Thank you once again for the great review. I love hearing your thoughts.

Meg


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