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Review:marauder5 says:
Here's my second review for the swap:

It was nice and cruel at the same time that Dominique got a few more moments of not knowing, to be blissfully unaware of what happened.

I think that her family's reactions are quite realistic. Of course, they would be sad for her, because her life will change completely now. Her parents could have shown a bit more support, and tried to be strong for her, but I guess that it was just too much to bear for them to see their daughter in that state. (By the way, does Louis not exist in your story?)

I think that Dominique's own reaction was the most touching one. I think she was being very mean to Teddy, and I do feel bad for him when she says those things about his father, but I think that's how anyone would react. It's very believable, which is what makes it so moving. It's so sad, because there really isn't anything that she can do but accept the fact that she is a werewolf now.

This was really good! I can't wait to see where this story will lead to. Your writing is spectacular!

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks for reading and reviewing again!

Yes, it was a little cruel wasn't it? Oh well.

I am glad you found the family's reactions realistic. Well, there's more to her condition than is being revealed right now which is why her parents couldn't really do much. Besides, Dom is the kind of person who likes to grieve alone. Yeah well Louis doesn't exist in my story, sorry!

I am glad you found Dom's reaction touching. Yes she was mean but hey she was tensed so it is acceptable. I am pleased you found it believable.

Thanks once more for your kind words. I am glad you're liking this!

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