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Review:-BookDinosaur- says:
Is it normal that when I saw you had a new chapter up, I was so happy that I literally choked on my soft drink? No? Okay then. Forget that.

Sooo, anyway. Nice chapter here, if a bit short. Don't worry Jack, I'm very proud of you. Ah, the origin of the spoon-throwing. Nice to know!

I absolutely loved the bantering between Scorp and Leo in the flashback. I was seriously giggling to myself like a loser the whole way through.

More hints of Chleo! Yay!

The Al-development in preparation for the sequel has begun, I'm guessing?

Oh, and an error I spotted: At the beginning, Al says 'The bigger the bottom number, the small the number?!' I think that's meant to be 'the smaller the number'.

PS-I've nominated this story for the 'Follow the Butterflies' Diadem, ie the diadem for the best fluff.

Author's Response: I'm drinking a soft drink right now! Is this fate? I think so. Sorry, I haven't been on the forums yet, mostly because I'm a wee bit busy. I'll be on there soon :).

You're proud of me?! Yes!

Yes, this chapter has just beaten out James' meltdown as my favorite. It was tough, but I think Scorpius' opposition to swearing did it for me. I know, I wrote it, so this sounds like complete gibberish...oh well. Nonsensical responses are my speciality.

It has! Albus is becoming a major character. Oh man, the sequel. So excited to get that first chapter up!

Oh yes, I'll go fix that now, thanks!

PS-I just had a spaz attack reading this. You did?! Woah...really?!

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