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Review:adluvshp says:
Hey! Here to review the fourth chapter for the swap!

Ah I think I am getting the hang of the italics part
before the chapter's beginning. It is from Ben's POV
right? Now I know xD I quite like those by the way.

This chapter was quite well-written. I think you
showed Dominique and her husband's reactions quite
realistically. Teddy's discomfort and dread was also
very evident throughout. Ben seems like a nice
enough man, I wonder if he will turn into a murderer,
how will that happen. I look forward to your
development of your characters.

The part at the end with Teddy and Remus was very
sweet too. It sort of reinforced Teddy's decision and I
liked that. The fatherly love is definitely there, but
not overdone.

So far, you're doing a brilliant job at the story and I
am hooked! I am loving the story really, it's all so
mysterious and I am curious to see how things will
play out next, so I am favouriting the story, and also
going to read the next chapter!

Great job!
10/10

Cheers!
AD
(AditiDraco95)

Author's Response: You're right, it's from Ben's POV. I'm glad you like those, they're fun to write! And they'll explain a lot about his character, so that's why I've added them.

It's nice to hear that their reactions were realistic. I honestly had no idea how they would react, other than the fact that they'd be upset, haha! ;) I think that one of the problems for Teddy is that he really likes Ben, but you can never be 100 % sure about a person, right?

Yes, watching Remus made Teddy sure that he'd made the right decision. I'm glad you liked it.

Oh, that makes me so exited! You're going to keep reading? You're adding it to your favourites? I'm so flattered, and I'm smiling goofily right now, because I'm so happy that you like it!! :D Thank you so much for your review :)


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