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Review:marauder5 says:
hi! I'm here for the review swap :)

I think that this was a very good and very interesting first chapter. In your author's note, you say that you worry that this might be boring, but there's really no need. It was far from boring, and I also think it was quite eventful for being the first chapter of a story. Sure, most of it simply described the setting, the back story as to why Dominique was there etc., but it was never boring! And the end of the chapter was brilliant - it makes me feel like I just have to keep reading! :)

Your descriptions are perfect and paint a very vivid picture of what's going on in the forest. It's a dark and sort of creepy felling throughout the chapter, and then it culminates in the final paragraph. I think the structure is really good, and it definitely keeps the reader interested.

It seemed like the werewolf who bit her was actually waiting for her there, as if he WANTED to bite her. I'm interested to see if you'll write a bit more about him or her in the upcoming chapters. I also look forward to seeing everyone's reactions, including her own, to her becoming a werewolf. I can't wait to read the next one :) You write so well, and it's very promising!!

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks for reading and revieiwng.

I am pleased you liked this first chapter. Its a relief to hear that you don't find it boring and instead eventful. I am glad you enjoyed the ending too.

I was worried I overdid the descriptions but it's great to know that you liked them and that the chapter had the desired feel. The structure is good? Really? Thanks!

Yes, there'll be more about the werewolf in the later chapters, once Dominique gets over the initial shock and starts investigating matters. I am happy you like my writing, thank you!

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