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Review:adluvshp says:
Here for review number three for the swap xD

Ooh I liked this chapter quite a lot. I liked how Teddy went to Harry for advice - it was very believable as Harry has been a father figure to him. I also liked the little details like Lily is always left out of stuff and such. The part about Bill was very realistic. As a father, I can definitely expect him to be concerned this way. I feel sad for Teddy now, the confrontation he'll have with Ben is bound to get awkward or weird or something.

I like the things in italics which you put before the start of the chapter, though I don't understand the snippets completely. Are they about Teddy and Victoire? Is it the past, present, or the future? It's a little confusing but definitely interesting.

All in all, great chapter as always. I quite enjoyed it. I am excited to see what happens next.

Moving on to the next.

cheers!
AD
(AditiDraco95)

Author's Response: Yes, I feel like Harry would be the first person that Teddy would turn to. I'm glad that you enjoy those little details - I think that they're quite important because they add more life to the story, so I'm so happy that you like them! Of course Bill would be furious and worried for his daughter.

The part in italics is actually supposed to be a bit confusing, but I think you'll understand it in time :) It takes place in the same time as the rest of the story!

Once again, thank you so much! It makes me so happy to hear that you're still enjoying it! :)


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