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Review:adluvshp says:
Here for the second review of review swap xD

Wow, this just keeps getting more interesting! I think I love your story already! I liked the way you started with showing Teddy's household, and his love for Victoire. It was heartwarming to see the two so happy together. And aw they named their son Remus. It was all quite sweet. I also liked the addition of Teddy telling Victoire about Roxanne's birthday party as it gave us some details into the Weasleys' lives.

Barett seems to be quite crazy and I don't blame Teddy for saying that he won't arrest a man who hasn't committed a murder yet, lol. But omg it's Dominique's husband, now that's shocking. I wonder what Teddy will do now.

So far the story seems to be doing great. Going on to the next chapter!

Cheers!
AD
(AditiDraco95)

Author's Response: You love it? Wow. How flattering, considering how much I love your writing!!

Yeah, I think that first part was quite important, because it showed Teddy and Victoire's happy life with their little family. I'm glad that the stories from the birthday party seemed to fit in as well!

Yes, crazy is just one of the words I'd use to describe Barrett. Finding out that it's Dominique's husband complicates things for Teddy. Poor guy.

I'm so glad that you like it! Thank you so much for this review :)


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