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Review:Illuminate says:
Hi! Review Tag!

This is a really nice oneshot! You always feel like Narcissa is not just a Death Eater, she's a very good mother and cares deeply for Draco. It makes complete sense that she would do everything you've written her to do in this story.

Good job incorporating the Challenge requirements, all of the spells and such made it feel comfortably magical xD Especially with the Boggart, that definitely gave some drama and surprise to it.

A peacock is perfect for Lucius! I love figuring out what all the characters' Patronuses would be.

Great job!

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

I am glad you liked this one-shot, and that Narcissa's actions made sense to you.

It wasn't easy incorporating the challenge requirements but I tried my best so thanks for the appreciation.

Haha I love figuring out patronuses too. I always thought peacock would suit Lucius.

Thanks!


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