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Review:Holly_Mist says:
Ian's mum is so - blargh! (keeping them reviews 12+), but i'm sure you understand how i feel about her ;)

I quite liked how Ian was portrayed! It wasn't the typical rich boy. I really loved how he was standing up for Ava. I legit went: AW!

More than anything, it was the Ava-Louis moments that made me love the chapter! I'm glad she finally understood that Ian and Louis are two different people! It means that she's (sorta) getting over him! :D I like how Louis keeps expressing his feelings - although in French! At least at no point can she say "you never told me you felt like that" or something along those lines!

Sorry for the ramble-y review. I'm going to stop now! Update soon! :D

Author's Response: TRUTH. (Thanks for keeping it 12+)

I'm glad! I do like him a lot, and I wanted to put this in so he's not just the nameless, faceless, evil character that everyone hates because he broke Ava's heart. He's a nice guy, really.

Ahaha, I think those were most people's favorite parts as well :) Yes, the goal is for her to move on and start looking for someone else. I'm glad you like how he can only be really truthful with her when she can't understand him; it's something I thought would be kind of interesting in terms of character. And you're right, she can't say that, although she didn't understand a word of it, so...

It's okay! I like ramble-y reviews :) An update is coming very soon!

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