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Review:adluvshp says:
Hey! Here for review tag!

When I read your one-shot, I wanted to come and read the sequel so I am glad I got the opportunity to do so!

This seems like a great start to the story. I liked how you focused on Ron and the way he was feeling. It was quite realistic. I hope Harry and Hermione can talk some sense into him now though. I wonder how the whole thing will play out for Cho and Draco though. You left this at a cliffhanger and have me curious as to how the plot unfolds further.

You seem to have improved in your writing compared to the one-shot as this flowed way better, and the descriptions were nicer. I quite liked it over all. I hope you continue writing!

9/10
Cheers!
AD
(AditiDraco95)

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