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Review:-BookDinosaur- says:
Review for Team Blue! ;)

This story... How can I describe it? It sent chills down my spine, I'm telling you!

I love the way you portray Lavender-it's just so, so heartbreaking. Needing to take a potion to love herself because she feels worthless? Needing to cake makeup on her face because 'I have never been told that Iím one of those girls who would be so pretty if she just took all that paint off her face'? It just portrayed her and how hopeless she felt perfectly, and it made me feel really sad for her. It's a one-shot, and yet Lavender lives and breathes in my mind, you've painted her so perfectly!

Her being a part werewolf is a really nice touch as well, I can see how alone and abandoned she feels.

Your description, as I've mentioned in the other review is just spot on. There aren't paragraphs of it, but somehow you've really managed to paint a vivid picture in my mind.

So, well done on a wonderful one-shot that I really enjoyed reading.

Author's Response: Yeah, I meant for Lavender to just be incredibly pitiable here in her complete self-loathing. It was interesting to explore the possibility of her living and having to cope after her attack during the final battle. It's like she's not human enough and not werewolf enough to fit in anywhere. It's also great to hear that the description seemed effective here.

Thanks for another lovely review :)


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