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Review:Twinkleflower says:
I actually spotted this a few weeks ago and have only just had a chance to read it. I really enjoyed reading this first chapter, as you make the reader feel a sense of dread along with the character. I like the fact that you chose Dominique out of the Next Generation cohort and to be cast as the main character rather than just a supporting role. I thought it was clever how you used the weather to set the tone and it helped the build up of the story. I can honestly say that I didn't expect there to be a wolf right outside the door, I thought there was going to be a chase. But I am glad you did it your way because I think it was much better and the perfect end to the chapter. You got me wanting to read more and I'm happy to see that there are more chapters to read, yay. I look forward to reading more and I really want to know what happens next.

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks for reading and reviewing. I am glad you got a chance to read it, and that you enjoyed it too. Dominique is one of my favourite next-gen characters and I like writing her so I am pleased you're happy with the choice. I love using the weather to set the tone for the story (it's actually a literary device called pathetic fallacy) so I am glad you liked it. Well we'll see why there was a wolf outside her door in the upcoming chapters. Thank you for all your kind comments.

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