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Review:Adeline says:
Hi! I've made a short list of a few of my favourite lines from this chapter here for you:

1) "he scared the Gryffindor out of me"
- The perfect expression to express fear, in my opinion :P

2) Dad shrugged. "Just saying. You might get cold. Or a sunburn. Jackets are nice."
- Ah yes, overprotective Ron at his best...this line made me smile :)

And last but not least:
3) "But how was I going to tell Danielle I'd been kissing another girl?"
- Definitely the ULTIMATE cliffhanger, a heart-stopping slap in the face if ever there was one. And it seems as though Rose has read my mind - who is Danielle???

Overall an awesome chapter as usual, can't wait to read the next :D

Author's Response: Oh favorite lines those are my favorite!!

1. LOVE that line. I laughed really hard while writing it.
2. I love Ron trying really hard not to make it SEEM like he's being protective.
3. Oh yes. I'm a sucker for a good cliffie and i'm afraid I torment all of you because of it. But you'll find out very soon!!

Thank you so much! I hope you enjoy the rest :)

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