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Review:AlexFan says:
RAVENCLAW REVIEW BATTLE!

I'll just come right out and say it, I love Dom, she's my favourite so far. I love how blunt she is and my favourite line by her was "Rose, if you seriously think Iím that much of a pushover, youíre getting me confused with Albus."

That part had me laughing so much.

I'm going to give Rose the same advice that my shop teacher gave me "if there's doubt then don't do it, stop and ask for help. There is no such thing as doubt."

That advice is applied more to using the death machines that are in woodshop than in real life but I think that that advice can be applied to just about anything.

Albus was pretty funny as well going into hysterics and such. It sounds like something my best friend or I would pull at each other's wedding, begin to freak out and imagine the worst case scenarios.

Just a couple of CC's, you've got a couple of grammar errors in the chapter that I would suggest fixing and I would also suggest watching out so that you don't slip up in verb tense. Other than that awesome job!

Author's Response: Hey there!

Haha I loved Dom she was just so much fun to write, and I almost want to go back and write more now that you've reminded me of how much fun she is :D

Your shop teacher sounds like a pretty wise guy! She does sort herself out in the end, she's just in the self-doubting stage at the moment!

Wub I loved Albus too, I thought it would be fun to make the guy go into hysterics instead of it always be the girl so I'm glad that you liked it!

Ooh thanks for pointing that out, and I'll go back and review it! Thanks for the great review, it made me laugh!

-Kiana


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