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Review:MrsJaydeMalfoy says:
I love this chapter, but for two separate reasons!

The first: I really love how you've given James a more sensitive side. He's always portrayed as a bit of a prat, so it's nice to see him grieving and, well... being mature!

Second reason: I LOVE James' "call to action" moment, if you get my meaning. He may not be done grieving, but he decides it's time to move on, to find Peach's killer. Brilliant!

And the hooded figure at the end is oh-so suspenseful and intriguing!

Well done dear!

Author's Response: James is mature and sensitive, he just doesn't show it much being a teenage guy :P It takes something major like a murder to change someone and hopefully he'll grow into a man because of this.

Out comes Detective Potter! It's one of his ways of dealing with his shock and grief, he doesn't strike me as someone who would sit down and do nothing, just no.

Ah, I hope you don't collapse or something from the mystery :D I know I would, I normally do at cliffhangers!

Thanks again Jayde!

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